Upon the wind
freedom's feathers spread to cast a shadow,
American Eagle, so proud and protective,
soars across the world as guardian and hunter,
ever ready to descend and devour rats.
A contest entry
- The Eagle Flies Quickie by carole21.
475 points, ended July 26, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Four Invitational by carole21.
1350 points, ended July 29, 2008, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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soars across the world as guardian and hunter,ever ready to descend and devour rats.a wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contest
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Oh My Word~
Yep the last line- those furry critters start scrambling like eggs
Excellent take on the prompt
Another one to Love
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweetness
Best wishes too
and my Love & Light
~ Desire~*~
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Rats terrorists same thing I love this.
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As always you did a nice job goodluck
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Great take on the prompt master poet
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Well my dear brother, I sis my sister loved this one, and well she is not the only one! This is incredible, and well you are sooooo right as normal with your reads!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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so true of the eagle . . thanks for the contest entry . .
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Another awesome poem done to perfection. I really enjoyed this. Good luck......
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Wow! You took this prompt in a direction that is so obvious yet I never thought of and did it brilliantly. In a few short words, you have shown the strength and dignity of our country.
Love,
Amera♥
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Wonderful. Freedom sounds out, can I get an amen?
Best wishes,
Jin
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Nice end there. Very patriotic in tone and powerfully write. Great work!
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I like this one! Good Luck in the contest!
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