eternity rises with the dawn
nightfall climbs with a lusty yawn
illuminates the pallor of forgotten stones
creates an illusion of somber tones
fingers sense the care of creation
an imposing circle rises with elation
unspoken harmony calls the moon
sings forever a forgotten tune
pebbles strewn along the way
cremations lie and cannot stray
Author notes
prompt: old
A contest entry
- Rhyme and Flow part 7 Old - 50,000 points series by cricketjeff.
4000 points, ended August 15, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Go For The Gold/Rhymers by piccola.
500 points, ended August 31, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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great job! it flows like the ebb and flow of the ocean being pulled by the moon...thank you for entering.
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Thank you for your entry in the contest, you have painted the images of your title well
All the best in the contest.
Sue and Jeff
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damit not a single word out of line.
What can I say.
Points I preserve. -
lovely rhyme my friend and the flow is fabulous. another gem from you.
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