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Woman

Woman!
Adoration of the Goddess
upon Earth
Astral body of light

Sent by the gods,

as punishment to man

Before the fall

We were One

Ethereal,  powerful
Your body sways,

in the rhythm of Creation

Your breasts sensual

filled with desire

Your lips inviting

 sweet as Nectar

Oh, Helen

Men were slayed, for your beauty

before the mighty walls of Troy

Maiden

Mother

Crone

In you I adore

my Goddess.

 

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  • Pixi
    September 16, 2008

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    i feel you are really obsessed with the idea of gods and godesses. it's obvious in most of your writes.
    i don't know if the word obsessed describes what i eel about your poems.

    thanks for sharing this one with us.

    sherry


  • mysticstorm gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    Lovely imagery...you said so much about the truth of women in beautiful grace...
    very enjoyable read...
    Best,
    mystic


  • nilav
    August 2, 2008
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    i enjoyed your perception of women.....


  • Jalalbad gold member
    August 2, 2008
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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 27, 2008

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    Ah..what a scenario of the her place you have stated ..I love thisverse...well done..and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful write ...

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