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Suicidal Poet

Fractured heart
Fearing the worst
Feelings overwhellming

They bury themselves
Within my soul
Driving me to the brink

I drive them out
Push them into
The light

Flowing through my hands
To the paper

Filling it with
Feelings so deep

Anger transformed
Beauty emerges

A poem
Lies before me

Author notes

Quote Inspired: Poets are basically suicides living life to the fullest

And for all of you worried people out there: I am NOT suicidal

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  • Unheard Whispers
    May 29, 2009
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    wow, this is so true, and beatiful i might add (: well done


  • storiesuntold
    December 15, 2008
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    Very good

    Yes when the muse hits a poet they will write on anyhting to capture it great write here


  • lizziebee02
    July 26, 2008
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    Quite Beautiful! I feel your pain and your love. You are a beautiful poet!


  • Dalaney gold member
    July 26, 2008
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    your ending is superb. thank you for entering. love, lane