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Flight

Curled up,
broken

like so many times,
I think of you.

You should be my refuge.

You've made me so alone
I ache with every thought of you.

There's no-one else,
Because you didn't love me.

I have no place to fall.
Therefore I will not fly.








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  • Restless and True
    July 29, 2008

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    Wow.

    I completely loved this. It made me think of a certain someone...

    "There's no-one else,
    Because you didn't love me."

    I feel you.

    ~Restless and True~


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 26, 2008

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    Wow, I love how you put this one
    together. It's so sad and filled
    with so many emotions. You did
    great with this short piece. Thanks
    for sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826