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Dark Haiku #13

Speak to me, my love
Do we share adoration
Or is it madness?



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  • individuality gold member
    May 27

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    a good poem, maybe it is both madness and adoration that passes between your lips in love's twirled mass


  • EmeraldDreams
    December 1, 2008

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    Ah, so many of us have felt this! How you manage to say so much in so few words is simply astounding.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    Love or madness, same thing aren't they?..lol. I like how this ends, leaving it open to the reader's interpretation. Thought provoking stuff

    Hehe I also like how pastels naming them for you..lol.


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    July 30, 2008

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    Nice

    I like the end question...nice fanwulf...or is it madness? I thought this provoked deep thought and emotions. Good work love. ~mandie~


  • PastelMoons gold member
    July 28, 2008

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    I will call this one
    Mad Love.
    You have taken the Haiku
    to another level...
    I love the darkly romantic
    but you already know that.
    It's good to read you again!!!
    ~Pastel

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