You daze me with your charm
Muse words? You the, love star
I watched and nudged from far
Loved each move made: on tar.
Gossip, looking at you for hours
Brilliance in the colors you wore.
Sparkling white pause and share
Tri star you are the ultimate; best.
At you touch my heart goes crazy
Shivers run down feel power frenzy.
Click goes the tongue coziness hits
Your embrace cushions my dreams.
Time spins the wheels as love thread.
Held together defining the purrs, Roar.
Cradled by you lusting to music calls
In you tenderness, your caress moves.
It is true: My brush with ecstasy’s few.
Accept my love for you, it is only you.
Author notes
Prompt:
The picture (Puegeot Ad - French car)
The above picture
ree wall poster from internet.
Placement credit: FD
A contest entry
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Comments
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Wow
Now THAT is an interesting take on the pic prompt! It took a couple of reads for all its depth and metaphors, but a well worth read. [But you used a Mercedes instead of a Puegeot - I had a Peugeot station wagon as my first car; it was neat - and different.]
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Wow, a woman as a highclass automobile. It's a valid metaphor, I guess, and very well described. They are expensive to run, though, and very high maintenance! Good luck in the contest
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Very good. Sensual and romantic.
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