silence
a voice never heard
fire
blazing red eyes
beauty
a pale reflection
gender
unworthy of importance's
religion
harsh and condemning
family
influential society
freedom
she knows none
A contest entry
- Points are Going up by Hello...No.One.Home.
1450 points, ended August 6, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow
this was really good. short with a whole lot of emotion. great job -
Awesome! I Like it a lot
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I have shivers reading this. I love it.
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Rose
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YEP
I know the feelings portrayed here all too well. Great and wonderful write. It flowed smoothely and made me want to read it over and over again. I also like the formatting. Simple but still stabs the point of this piece into the heart. Beautiful and best of wishes in the contest.
mandie
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