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Fallen Soul 2

She fell from heaven,
hitting the ground face first.

She is forever damned
to walk the earth as mortal.

The girl is neither angel nor demon,
she is the key between them.

The two worlds colide within a young body,
in a forever struggle of Angel and Demon.

Author notes

unlike "FALLEN SOUL" this is more spaced out and a bit different... and the main character is a girl..

though like the other part it wasn't meant to be a religious christian thing.

for the last time I AM NOT A CHRISTIAN! I'M AGNOSTIC! gods... it may be "religious" to you but to me "heaven" is something that is an ideal and "hell" is reality.

and as far as demons and angels... i'm not going to even go into that.

for the last bloody time I AM NOT CHRISTIAN! and i DON'T get "spiritual" i write what i feel and how i see life. so "demons" and "angels" aren't some higher force or myth to me, but something paranormal and unexplained by modern ways of thinking.

and PLEASE remember that most of the time my worlds don't have a modern meaning always but more of an older english most of the time.

(yes you would not believe the amounts of messages i got asking what bible and shit i read..... so i'm pissed off about that.)

what do you think?

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  • Binary
    August 4, 2008

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    Love it.

    Love it!! Like usual.


    PS: Don't pay attention to the people who give you stupid responses.

  • Shayla Walker
    July 28, 2008

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    Nice continueance from Fallen Soul. You may not mean to be so versatile and relatable, but your writing has different effects on a vast of people. You reach people in a personal way. Good job.