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the Cards I Am Signing Today

Our first day of camping,

  At last I am outof school.

Eight years if Law, time for summer fun.

  Dad and I  camping, Father and son.

I am signing his "Father's Day " card.

  Writting" Your Son, With Love".

 

So many years and time slipped away.

  We both waited for today.

Mom packed food for a couple of days.

  Dad and I packed all the gear.

With Mom's blessing, we left and she stayed home.

  The weather said, "Good camping days."

 

We spent a week and had great days.

  Time to pack it up and be on our way.

I have another card to sign today.

  Telling Anne I'll be back in a day.

I missed her with lots to say.

  Dad will have a Daughter-in-law one day.

 

Dad thought the days were great.

  Anne likes camp, and I can't wait.

We all can go camping and having fun.

  The answere to all my dreams.

She likes camping and fishing- thinks she is Queen.

  She always catches more fish than me.

 

 

 

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  • lightswitches
    July 30, 2008

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    This was good. I would say that the rhyming was a bit off or at times even redundant, however, the subject matter truly made up for it!
    thank yo€u


  • Sandygram silver member
    July 30, 2008

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    God Morning!!!

    This was so delightful to read dear friend. Your words brighten up my day. Thank you for always bring us smiles!! hugs and Smiles.

    Bless You.
    Sandy


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 26, 2008

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    She can catch more fish?? Woohoo, now that's a woman!
    Ok, I'm only pickin' on ya. I like this. It is filled with memories that will keep a smile upon your face. Nicely done and best to you in the contest.

    Storm


  • Katie Lazette
    July 26, 2008
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    Nicely written poem filled with fond memories. I enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest.


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 26, 2008
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    LOL --Very cute and it brought a smile to my face!
    Well done & good luck to you!

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