Pain contained in eyes
struggling
to pave its way out
Locks of hair
effortlessly overshadow
sorrow ,
gushing from heart.
Difficult to look
into,
dark side
of life.
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Oh wow! I love the feel to this one, with the background that compliments your poetry so well!
Great write!
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Well Done !!!
Nice,
keep it up.
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Wonderful poem dear...loved the imagery about hair...
Well BG is good, blue font colour seems more readable than yellow..sorry logged in just now!
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A wonderful poem.
Note: Did not credit the artist....that's bad.
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All the best dear!
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oh forgot abt the rose lol
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thanx will finish it leisurely as i have 8hrs time now.
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I am sure you will come up with something great!
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inshallah. but m not sure.
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Inshallah and lots of
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i hope the BG is readable. plz check.
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