Arms extended;
opened to your heart,
yet you keep me intertwined-
always suspended through time.
Friends call me back,
but you keep teasing;
here I am,
forever longing to reach.
Author notes
30 words or less...
Prompt - Tittle: The Wind and the Sea
free-verse, metaphor, creative, imagery, etc.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt 30 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended August 8, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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death keeps us wanting it soooo much doesnt it....... thats what i got out of this.... great job thanks for sharing...... love ya
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Inter play is excellent.
The take too is sharp and to a point very clear.
What amazes me is you get no prize.
The judges get played by words. To say they understand when they really don't: they give that poem the prize.
Lol
Beautiful.
I click to remember to enter your contest when you post one and check out your other writes.
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this is beautifully written and it has such a strong and fitting touh to the prompt itself. well done with this piece
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