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Fool

I was that fool
O most foolish of fools
How could I have trusted in you?
I am the fool
More foolish is the fool who fallows
As I had always done
“I am smarter than this!” I falsely asserted
How, I wish I could eat those words
Place them back behind my teeth once more
You laugh at me now
I can hear it echoing along my ribcage
How proud you must be?
For tricking me yet again, I the fool
“But no more, no more!” I yet again protest
Searching for the strength to rip you from my chest
I still am the fool
O most foolish of fools

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  • DecievingBeauty
    August 2, 2008
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    This is a good write! It speaks to me. Keep up the good work!