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Too far away

That time is so far away..
when you loved me and
I loved you..all I can say
is that is so far away..
forever and a day..
you were all to my
throbbing heart...
but you broke it
all apart!
One day I saw you
and you just stared
at me, just like it
was 1973..but I knew
when I saw you that day..
that time is too far
away.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 26, 2008

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    Ah..the wonders of life and the the thunders of the memories are the true sentiments of life...well done ..and thanks for sharing it....