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En attendant Műrier

Serge:  Will he come today?

 

Hippolyte:  Műrier?

 

Serge:  Yes, Műrier. Will he come? Do you think he will come?

 

Hippolyte:  Yes, he’ll come. I have faith that he will come. He told us to wait here for him. Here. By the tree.

 

Serge:  What tree?

 

Hippolyte:  That tree. The one behind us.

 

Serge:  That one? It looks like a bush to me.

 

Hippolyte:  A tree.

 

Serge:  A bush.

 

Hippolyte:  A shrub.

 

Serge:  A bush.

 

Hippolyte:  A tree.

 

Serge:  Is it his? Is it his bush?

 

Hippolyte:  Tree. He owns all the land around here, so yes, it is his.

 

Serge:  I’m cold. Give me your coat.

 

Hippolyte:  If I give you my coat, then I’ll freeze.

 

Serge:  But at least one of us will be warm.

 

Hippolyte:  And one of us will freeze to death. I hate you.

 

Serge:  I hate you.

 

Hippolyte:  Let’s forgive each other.

 

Serge:  Yes, let’s.

 

Hippolyte:  Let’s embrace.

 

Serge:  My dear!

 

Hippolyte:  My dear!

 

Serge:  How time passes when one is having fun. Will he come?

 

Hippolyte: Műrier?

 

Serge:  Yes. Soon.

 

Hippolyte:  If you’re cold, we could walk round the tree.

 

Serge:  The bush? Yes we could. But if he came and we weren’t here…

 

Hippolyte:  We would be here.

 

Serge:  He told us to wait here. By the bush.

 

Hippolyte:  The tree. But look here, if we take our current distance from it as being the radius of a circle, then if we proceed round it we are – ipso facto – always by it.

 

Serge:  True.

 

Hippolyte:  Besides, we walked round it yesterday.

 

Serge:  Did we? I don’t recognize it. Was it really yesterday?

 

Hippolyte:  Yes, I am sure. And the day before.

 

Serge:  It had leaves on it then.

 

Hippolyte:  It must be autumn now.

 

Serge:  I’m cold.

 

Hippolyte:  Look at the state of you. What if he comes? What if Műrier comes? You should comb your hair.

 

Serge:  I haven’t a comb.

 

Hippolyte:  Use your fingers, then.

 

Serge:  Like this?

 

Hippolyte:  Yes.

 

Serge:  You should shine your boots.

 

Hippolyte:  I haven’t a brush.

 

Serge:  Use your sleeve.

 

Hippolyte:  Like this?

 

Serge:  Yes. And we should brush our teeth too.

 

Hippolyte:  And then we could walk round the tree.

 

Serge:  The bush, Hippi, the bush.

 

Hippolyte.  The tree, Gégé.

 

Serge:  I’m cold. Will he come soon?

 

Hippolyte:  Yes, he will come. I hope he will come. Today. Or tomorrow.

 

Serge:  Meanwhile…

 

Hippolyte:  … we could walk around the bush…

 

Serge:  … again.

 

Hippolyte:  I am cold.

 

Serge:  Will he come? Will Műrier come?

 

Hippolyte:  Yes. Soon.

 

 

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  • Vera Rich gold member
    August 7, 2008

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    VERY neat and enigmatic... And THANK you for not putting an explanation... Part of the fun of this competition was surely to identify which authors and which rhymes...


  • Zorro69
    July 27, 2008

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    Oh dear, oh dear, this contest is drawing some topclass entries (as well as mine, which you don't seem to have read yet). What with your efforts, Edna's and mine, the others have as much chance as a cat in Hell (un chat en l'enfer).


  • Keith
    July 26, 2008

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    I wouldn't be beaten by the title, so I Googled it. It's Here we go round the Mulberry Bush, isn't it? And I've seen Waiting For Godot, a really good production when I was younger. Sam Beckett would be proud. And so should you be. Who's going tae judge this? Oh that'll be me.....Excellent.


  • PerVirtuous
    July 26, 2008

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    Reminiscent of 'Rosenvrantz and Guildenstern are Dead'. Hyppolyte's mom always gave me the heebeejeebees. Cute. Keith will like this. Have some bunnies.


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      July 26, 2008

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      Interesting that this should recall Tom Stoppard - not what I was aiming for, but you wouldn't be the first to draw comparisons between him and the author I'm parodying.

      If I can find a nursery rhyme where I can have two characters flipping a coin for hours, I'll do it!

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