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Sea of Imperfections

submergence piqued deep
in a sea of imperfections;
a dance of obscurity
within darkened realms;

a porcelain alabaster beauty
relinquishing immortal sins;
splotched of treachery
sending dismay adrift
winds' selflessness

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  • anaisnais
    July 26, 2008

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    Wow, those words speak to me of darkest deepest deapths, but is it a sea of despair? I believe a pale or deathly maiden floats eternally....or maybe I'm way off track? lol. Still meaningful to me....