submergence piqued deep
in a sea of imperfections;
a dance of obscurity
within darkened realms;
a porcelain alabaster beauty
relinquishing immortal sins;
splotched of treachery
sending dismay adrift
winds' selflessness
Author notes
PROMPT:
Picture and title
please credit the artist... "The Wind and The Sea" by ChrissieCool
30 words or less
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt 30 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended August 8, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow, those words speak to me of darkest deepest deapths, but is it a sea of despair? I believe a pale or deathly maiden floats eternally....or maybe I'm way off track? lol. Still meaningful to me....



