Angel death ghostly form pale
in skies darkened hue.
Winds beckon your banshee call
dragging souls in haunting demise.
Neath your feet.
salty sea, tears of lost,
essence your darken soul.
Author notes
credit the artist... "The Wind and The Sea" by ChrissieCool
This was my take on picture, had to rethink it first draft was 56 words..I liked it. This is still one word over sorry. Thanks for making me think
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt 30 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended August 8, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Dark & Mysterious!
Dark & Mysterious! This is haunting, chilling, atmospheric and full of rich graphically presented and sculpted descrptives which bore right into the soul as you reas. Lovely haunting storyline, wow fabulous exhilarating read. Well done, love it, bravo! Bewtiching!
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx -
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Thanks so much for your read and comment. The constraints of contest caused me to cut this done from the first draft. I'm glad you enjoyed.
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