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A Peek at Freedom

My freedom is looking out a window
when I'm busy.

It's walking along the beach.
It's visualizing the earth
through the eyes of a seagul.

It's watching my dog eat
and wondering what it's like for her.
It seems like nothing else matters during a meal.

It's the freedom to imagine.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    July 31, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Wow. I love the simplistic feeling this holds ... there is so much longing it I could almost cry from the desire of freedom, but I smile with the freedom to imagination


    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    July 30, 2008
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    Welcome to Allpoetry and thank you for entering the contest

    I love this. Being able to see freedom through the eyes of another is always interesting, and having the freedom to see what you wish, and dream high is so amazing.


    Welcome to Allpoetry and I hope that you enjoy your stay
    Thank you for entering our contest and I wish you the best of luck

    Should you have any questions, please feel free to ask me


  • Dienush
    July 30, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Wow, I love the images you have here. This is a pretty creative personification of freedom. Good luck in the contest.


  • greyhaime silver member
    July 26, 2008

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    welcome to allpoetry

    such a freedom indeed. to imagine. what would we be like with out that freedom,
    thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest!
    cheers
    Grey