I love it when you touch me
I love it when you hold me
I love it when you whisper ever so
G E N T L Y
To me.
I love it when you laugh
I love it when you smile
I love it when you get all embarrassed
When you admit you love me.
I love it when you glance at me
I love it when you show off
I love the little daring comments you say
Just to make me smile.
I love how you make me feel
I love how you make me live
I love how you're always there
Ready and willing to laugh.
I love you
You could never have a flaw.
I hate having you cry because of me
I hate it when you worry
I hate it when you're all upset
And trying not to cry.
I hate it when you don't care
I hate it when you shove away
I hate it when you do something dangerous
When you could get badly hurt.
I hate it when you don't know what you can do
I hate it when you're full of doubt
I hate it when you try and hide your emotions
Even though they still show through.
I fear for you
I don't want you hurt.
But that was what used to be
And will never be again.
Now take all those words
Love and hate
And switch them around
So they're in each other's place.
Author notes
ya.. um.. not ALL of these feelings are true, but most of them are. lol, dunno where this came from, just kind of happened. And I tried to explain in the last verse. Replace all the "I loves" with "I hate" and vise versa. I was ranting a little. Dunno, I have this crazy intention that if I keep writing about how much I hate him, it'll come true eventually o.O
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OMG> totaLLy LovE tHiS PoEm DuDE
Keep up the wicked writes
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you have filled this with many different types of raw emotion and with situations you do and don't want to find yourself in. very good.
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Wow big turn in the end!!!! loves it lots
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thanks
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I love this. I like how you put it too, worded very nicely ^.^
But that was what used to be
And will never be again.
Now take all those words
Love and hate
And switch them around
So they're in each other's place.
that has to be my fav part <3. Anyway do you ever think maybe you don't have to hate him? Hate isn't gettong the world anymore, and I'm sure he's still a good person and thats why you can't hate. I wouldn't give up on him just yet! Nice job on this =] -
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I'm glad you liked it. I don't neccisarily hate people, just for the reason that's there's too much, just dislike, but I didn't think dilike was a strong enough word, and I wanted this poem to kind of have an impact. And thanks so much
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i love this. the end is defintally my favorite, when i began reading it i waslike yuk not another love poem but it was amazing
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thanks ^-^ i'm glad you liked it. And that's exactly the reaction I was trying to get the readers to have Glad it worked
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Sweet
Woahh. I love the end it got me it was just like wow.
Loved ittt:]
And c;mon we dont need you hating anyone.
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I'm glad you liked it ^-^ lol. and you know me, I don't hate, only dislike
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whoa lots of different thoughts all in this. but it's good. I guess you can send this to some guys as a guide to what they should be like
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thanks
lol maybe I could.... no not really, it was for one guy, and I couldn't try and change others to make me happy :S that's just... not me.
But i'm glad you enjoyed it ^-^
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