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Unpleasant Pleasantry

 


Smooth wind sailing

through my bitter pale skin

trespassing with pure delight.

 

Dis-figuration contemplating

the cold waters break

from upon my reckless body. 

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Credits: "The Wind and The Sea" by ChrissieCool

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  • TyrannyForestFairy
    July 26, 2008

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    Simple yet deep and meaningful through wonderful metaphors and descriptions. This was a great write, good work!

    ~Emily~ xx


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 26, 2008

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    the image itself is captivating b ut your words enhance this and make it so provoking and wonderfully created


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 25, 2008

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    This image is very captivating
    and thought provoking. Great
    take on the prompt and good luck
    to you with this one!




    Jeremy0826