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... because being near you, even just thinking about you, is like trying to breathe in New York City - you try not to because you know it's poison to your body, but you do because you also know you would die if you didn't...

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For contest.

This is actually from a story I started writing a few years ago and have abandoned for the time being in favor of one that may actually turn out. Hope it pleases!

A contest entry

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    July 28, 2008
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    Wow, powerful, thanks for your entry lol