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Wash ove Me

The blue,blue, blue of the ocean; oh how I long to see.

But most of all I wish to feel the ocean tide rise to meet my feet.

Lulling me to sleep with the rythmic motion of the water.

Cooling, contrasting between the hot sand and the coolness of the water.

Bringing dreams of weightlessness and freedom from all cares.

Burdens float away; never to return.

Rise cool water and wash over me take away all pain.

Free me from this prison that keeps my body in these chains.

Hypnotize me with your sound of wave rising wave after wave.

I'll rise above and sleep on clouds; no surface to cause me pain.

Dreaming of a life of freedom and I can run again.

Run and walk even clean my house is a dream for me.

Mind clear and thoughts connected; even read a book.

Ocean tide wash over me and make me all anew.

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  • tawk gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    I love the ocean and how it brings such a sense of peace too me. A wonderful and amazing write thanks or sharing. Such vivid imagery and emotion. Good luck in the contest Theresa


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 27, 2008

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    Thanks a lot for taking the time to
    enter this contest! Please review the
    contest rules and edit your poem.
    Thanks for being an active member in
    this group!




    Jeremy0826


  • Nicada silver member
    July 26, 2008

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    This poem is wonderful, and has such a gentle, soothing feel to it. I feel very comforted reading this. You have used some amazing imagery here too. I wish you the best in the contest. Blessings, Patty