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Tears of a broken heart

She sighed as he looked out her window at him and she stood there watching him outside with his friends. His tight shirt, spiked up hair, tight jeans, laughing with his friends. She smiled as he looked over at her in the window and winked at her. The world felt like it was fading away for her and he was all she could see. She waved and he laughed as he looked at his friends not waving back. She walked over to her bed and sat down as she held her pillow close to her as she then lied down on her bed loving him, and nothing else in her life seemed to matter to her except him. She stood up and walked out side and started to walk over to him and he saw her and smiled. She stood still as she watched another girl run up to him and hang onto his arm as he kissed the girl gently. A tear ran down her face as she turned and started to run off back to her house crying. Confused, sad, and heart broken...

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  • UnravledLove
    July 26, 2008
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    Oh this is beautifully sad. I love how it sounds great job and nice write.

  • aaaaaaaa
    July 25, 2008

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    I guess this is like an older boy kinda crush thing? don't worry about it, just be yourself and don't start trying to act like an adult like I've seen other girls do to get the older guys. your time will come.


  • orangerose101491
    July 25, 2008

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    wow that was awesome... i know what thats like.. and i just want to say this is a very good way to express it. great job.