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what is love?

                                                                                                                      o  

                                                                                                          x
                                                                                                                                           x 

                                                                               ?                                            x     

                                                                         ?

                                                    is

                                                               love
                                     what

 

 

                  love                           the
                                    is
                                                            laughter                children                            x
                                                                                 of

 

 

floating                         air
              on        the
                                                 with                            n                                x
                                                       milk                   w
                                                             _               o                                                 o
                                                                weed  d                                          x
                                                                                                    x
                                                                                                x

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Draig aine gold member
    October 15, 2008
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    thumbs up

    my fa view the night sky, lovely


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 20, 2008

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    Funky form, I like this very much! Great write, thank you for entering the contest, good luck.

    ♥
    whisper


  • just mercedes gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    This is beautiful! Fun form, and a wonderful response to the question. I float with the milk-weed - down, and maybe up...


  • Grunts Girl gold member
    August 28, 2008

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    you know.. now i have that song...
    what is love?? baby dont hurt me.. dont hurt me ...
    no more..
    lol
    how fun was this.

  • WritingWretch silver member
    August 24, 2008

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    e.e.cummings move over.

    Fun piece. Floats on the page and the poem is ok too. Title is a strange question. Is it Original? Fairly specific answer but accurate in some respects.
    Write on!
    Return the favor?


    • DogFish silver member
      August 24, 2008
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      I'm definitly blushing, you're too kind in your encouragement, "WW"!
      "what is love?" You say the "title is a strange question" but that is what was asked in the contest instructions...I suppose there are !0,000 answers to that question; I offered one.


  • BreathlessSunset
    August 17, 2008

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    The way you draw the reader's eye around the page is amazing. A sweet and lovely piece. Quite a joy to read.

  • ea silver member
    August 16, 2008
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    This is adorable. I love shape poetry when it works like this.


  • xXDarkChildXx
    August 13, 2008

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    Oh my goth.. hehe that was a bit tough for me to read, cause of the format. but, I loved the format, it was so, original! hehe Congrats on the silver =) You deserved it. I love your way of taking what love means or is to you. It is different for everyone though. hehe Nicely done. =)

    xXDCXx

  • Rowan gold member
    August 1, 2008
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    What a great format for this... and yeah, trippy-good.
    Congratulations!


  • vaseline
    July 28, 2008
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    lol trippy


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    July 28, 2008
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    Very clever


  • onerios13
    July 26, 2008

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    LOL.

    This was priceless...and so superbly true.

    Now I gots to get some aspirin cause my eyes are twitchin'... lol

  • aaaaaaaa
    July 26, 2008

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    holy crap! I have no idea what's going on in here but I kinda like it! haha. but yeah it looks cool but I can't understand anything.


  • Amergin
    July 25, 2008
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    Crazy! I love it!

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