Repressive resources open up to empty wishing wells
By the way her eyes are carved, she’s insane as hell
Vindictive desires course over her veins
Screaming fires; possession regained…
Abashing freedom with broken luminescence
She’s just an angel made from astringent.
Sadistic desires ruin her mind,
She’s ready for another gleeful night.
Beauty’s essence spoke from within,
Her soul; capture, tortured by sin;
Committed redemptions, a lot to possess
Dislocated pretensions become evanescent.
Conduce the victim to realize he’s been betrayed,
A love once forlorn no becomes his reason to pray.
Blood now seeps from her mouth,
His sentence was paid without such pout.
Demon with powers to be your puppeteer,
Medieval men dressed up as musketeers;
They will never bring down this source of power,
This relic beauty, which all hearts devour.
Darkness arisens before her eyes,
she's a goddess to those who are afraid of the light;
come join her in her broken shell,
come and join her reign her Hell.
Author notes
"Darkened Decadence"
word bank:
vindictive
sadistic
luminescence
evanescent
essence
screaming
gleeful
Quote:
"Do not ask which creature screams in the night, Do not question who waits for you in the shadow. It is my cry that wakes you in the night, And my body that crouches in the shadow. I am Tzeench and you are the puppet That dances to my tune."
~Karanzantor the Vile, The Traitor of Xian
Picture:
http://vamphunter777.deviantart.com/art/Vampire-Marta-70176846
In a list
A contest entry
- Darkened Decadence No PW by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1000 points, ended September 4, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Never Again Will This Hurt Me
Comments
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first congrats on the well if not more deserved HM... this was well done... great rhyme.... i love rhyme lol.... thanks for sharing this....
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Sadistic desires ruin her mind,
She’s ready for another gleeful night.
These two lines go off on the flow alittle the rhyme on the other lines is every line but these two cut off from that.
no >> now
arisens >> arisen
Darkness arisen before her eyes,
she's a goddess to those who are afraid of the light;
again the rhyme and flow get knocked a little
Overall this is very very well penned.
I enjoyed reading this alot! you used the word bank very cleverly and You did very well.
All my love.
thanks for entering
-vampy xxx
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Very nice take on the word bank. I liked it alot. My favorite lines were:
By the way her eyes are carved, she’s insane as hell
Vindictive desires course over her veins
Screaming fires; possession regained…
Great job.
Mike
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word bank:
vindictive
sadistic
luminescence
evanescent
essence
screaming
gleeful -
"Do not ask which creature screams in the night, Do not question who waits for you in the shadow. It is my cry that wakes you in the night, And my body that crouches in the shadow. I am Tzeench and you are the puppet That dances to my tune."
~Karanzantor the Vile, The Traitor of Xian
heres your quote
damn i loved that
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ill get you both, pic will be first because i plan on going to bed soon and will get the word bank for you tomorrow sound ok?
love you hun
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