Raise my cherry, firm and seculant,
to scary heights of vanilla mountains,
dropping double-breasted, painted hillsides, craving spoon,
swooning wrist in tasty twist
of crystal-fountain.
I am dream in choclate river,
moonshine topping, craving banana, swimming dish,
as captured wish,
such delightful fruit,
within your eyes to find my center.
A contest entry
- PIF Prompt Contest by CarolDesjarlais.
700 points, ended July 27, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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lol underlying meaning...beata hit it right on.... absolutely tasteful ...yup yup yup
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This is quite inticing and delicious
Only you could write such a tasteful while TASTY poem
love it
Lynda
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I'm impressed by the fact that you can write an entire poem about a dessert, plus make it sound good. Is there an underlying meaning, perhaps?
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