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Sequester My Soul

Silence me in serenity,
Escaping through eyes yet unseen.
Quicken the heart, beating
Unbridled with a new day's dawn.
Empowered in your words
Slaking my ever longing thirst.
Take me to your heaven,
Embodied within deepest passion
Rising to celestial corridors.


Moments lost in a cosmic galaxy,
Yearning for no end to this universe called Love.


Soft, the tranquil enveloping where
Our lips meet, glistened by moonbeams and stars;
Uniting for the very first time,
Lingering, as you sequester my soul.

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  • Antonio Valentino
    August 5, 2008
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    Congratulations dear poet, wonderful write.

    Antonio


  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    I Love This Form And Flow.

    Thanks for sharing sweet sis, bravo, and me hopes ya get GOLD! :D
    Peace to you, and much love, brother Timothy *hug* :f

    :f :f :f

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 29, 2008

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    Thank you for your beautifully spoken entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 28, 2008

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    This is just beautiful like your sweet soul,
    you are an amazing poet... and your words here
    prove it...

    Joann

  • aaaaaaaa
    July 26, 2008

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    I love the way you set up this acrostic. it looks great.
    "Moments lost in a cosmic galaxy," great line write here. thanks for sharing

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