Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Shadow in the Dark

Evil,
they call me,
an undying
monstrosity,
but they don't know
the things I've seen,
the things I've done.

I've seen men die
for nothing
more then lust.

I've seen women scream,
curdling the blood
of strong men.

I am stronger
for it. None
of you can stop
me, and if you try,
Hell will be the afterparty
for us all.

Author notes

Darkend decedence

Quote please, dark. Thanks

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    August 24, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    very nice take on the prompt, i like this poem alot
    it shows true strength and hope and yet it is dark,
    all my love,
    best of luck in the contest kitty
    kitty xxx


  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 8, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Brilliant take on the quote, deeply dark and foreboding air to it. Good luck in the contest


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 25, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    "No one holds command over me.
    No man. No god. No prince.
    What is a claim of age for ones who are immortal?
    What is a claim of power for ones who defy death?
    Call your damnable hunt.
    We shall see who I drag screaming to hell with me."
    -Gunter Dorn, Das Ungeheuer Darin. Vampire the Masquerade 2nd Edition Book