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the truth

i am not a number
or soil, i am not necessary.
            neither are you.

in the spiral of a shell
there are secrets being kept.
creation contemplates
the infinite pounding of hearts,
love is only a chemical imbalance.

as age decorates my face
i am unchanged...

          unnecessary.











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never ending math equation by modest mouse

it's a little different than my usual tone,
please comment and critque.
peace to all ~flight

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  • Salt Walker
    July 28, 2008
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    yes it is different. let me read it a couple of more times.