Concave corridor -red asylum-
streaking veins of filth and fervour litter pasty pavement.
-cover-shield-hide-
disillusion reality.
Fearful absence fears sense;
chunks of sable sanity and suicide,
surround an unstable mind.
Author notes
Darkened Decadence
Prompt:
http://kefirux.deviantart.com/art/fear-64222692
A contest entry
- Darkened Decadence No PW by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1000 points, ended September 4, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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An awesome piece, the darkness is powerfully strong here, short yet speaks volumes. Good luck
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this is powerful i like where you took the prompt,
this is wonderful, thank you for entering,
all my love, best of luck in teh contest
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I like this poem a lot. It's something so short, but so powerful.
Great write
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thank you so much
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i really love this poem. your diction is truly evocative and it commands attention.
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thank you so much
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http://kefirux.deviantart.com/art/fear-64222692 hows this hun
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ooh its great! thanks!
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