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Creamed Aristocracy

Traipsing through the stifling summer night's air

for an audience with royalty, oh glorious Dairy Queen.

Standing in line before her palace, sweating and dreaming of some tasty decree

of that perfect second in creamed anointing,

when her luscious frozen vanilla scepter knight's my mouth

and slowly melts after an ordination of ravenous licks,

nobility never crowned my tasted buds better,

serf of her aristocracy's concoction rule

cherishing when she lavishes my cone by dips in chocolate and nuts,

leaving feeling as a King, while sucking on Mr. Misty as toast to honor her throne.

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Prompt- ice cream

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  • Ithica silver member
    July 27, 2008

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    YUMMMMMY!!! That's all I'm going to say... [except I just scanned for my keys due to your powerful persuasion...] The diet can wait ANOTHER day... hehe!!

  • Judith Chandler
    July 26, 2008

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    Dairy Queen! That name brings back memories. Aristocracy for sure. I like this extended mataphor. There's a mock heroic feeling about this that I really enjoyed.

    Thank you for your entry.


  • innocence jaded.xx
    July 25, 2008

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    Wowww. Amazing, I loved this, haha. Ice cream. Gotta love it =) I love how you wrote this so brilliantly. Incrediblee. I especially loved the line:

    -cherishing when she lavishes my cone by dips in chocolate and nuts,

    leaving feeling as a King, while sucking on Mr. Misty as toast to honor her throne.
    ...

    hahah, that is so creative ! I loved it ! Keep writing & good luck in that contest ! ♥