The light?
The light at the end of the tunnel?
I don't know what you mean but I don't see a ending any time soon.
A silver lining?
A silver lining around every cloud?
Do you know how crazy you sound?
A glass half full?
A glass half full what do you mean?
It's leaking.
I don't know what your saying but I have been stuck in this hell for too long.
Is this that stupid Karma you speak of?
I'm never gonna see a light.
Clouds are lined in grey.
The glass is almost empty.
I don't know what you see but it wont save me.
I don't know what you see.
Wait is that me?
No it can't be me.
who is she?
did she come to save me?
Well best of wishes to her it wont work.
What do you mean it will?
Are you crazy?
It never works.
Wait whats with the white?
Since when do they come with light?
You have to be joking.
It is the real thing.
Oh praise the lord i am saved.
Wait whats going on?
Wheres she going?
It's dark again.
I'm so scared of it.
No don't leave the shadows will engulf me again.
Please don't leave.
Not again.
I lost all hope.
And there she was.
But it all is a trick.
Show me happiness.
And pull her away along with her light.
And there she was.
And there she goes.
Author notes
I really don't know what this is
A contest entry
- Shadows by Danna Hobart.
390 points, ended October 12, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thank you so much
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One of the best entires I have read so far. Thank you for entering my contest.
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aww thanks and np
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Who is this about, i gotta know now 0.o
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i told you lol its one of your ex-gfs
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who cares WHAT it is?? IT'S brilliant! i like how you took some of life's cliches and twisted them around. nice write!
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aww thanks so much bebe u rock
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