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the way u make me feel

 This is the way u make me feel...
deeply forgotten inside the pain is overwhelming...
how the night turns to blood in my heart..
i feel the burn of hatred;
desiring to pull the flesh from your heart;
wondering if you feel any remorse..
never felt,
you think drowning yourself in modern marvels helps...
i fear not...
today is the day i share the pain...
deeply trembling..
however i never see you again...
i run from the day,
i know it will be soon and i hope i am who i am..
due to the fact i am who i am...
u shall desire me again and i will return the pain..
i am beautiful and desirable and i am here to stay...
i found someone else!

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  • Shydreamer3
    July 25, 2008
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    LOVED it you are a definite possibility.