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Boning






The smell of bile on a cold tile floor;
a memory she won't have in the morning.
Her shame hidden behind the a locked door;
the smell of bile on a cold tile floor.

He's telling his friends of his new whore
and how much he'll enjoy her boning.
The smell of bile on a cold tile floor;
a memory she won't have in the morning.







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  • Mari Goes gold member
    August 14, 2008

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    With few lines you show a very sad picture.
    Unfortunately, a common scene...

    As usual, the form is a delight to see.



  • Beata
    July 25, 2008
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    wow, this poem is so short but so powerful.
    and....dirty
    I like it.