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Haiku: willow






a morning frost
resists the days warming sun
beneath the willow







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  • Candy6
    October 23, 2008
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    Great haiku


  • IrishGypsyRose
    July 30, 2008

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    Great imagery and use of traditional haiku. I like the relations to nature. I want to applaud ~mandie~


  • vampira1665 silver member
    July 30, 2008

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    sigh

    That was rather soothing. Even the background added to the softness of this short but sweet piece.

    Hope all is well with ya hun!

    Hugs,
    vampi


  • Simply Olivia
    July 25, 2008
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    great!