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Juliet's a little whore
Who died a day on Montague's door
And Romeo's my lying pimp
Who owes me for saving his bitch

Such rotten stories of Hamlet and Hal
Such idiots and horror hounds
Kill the plot and give me stones
Pay the fare and take me home

Throw tomatoes for my soul
The stories dead tonight
Throw the javelin for yourself
For the murder, for the fight!!

Ah...
And everything sucks, right?
Cut my wrists, they're so perfect
By themselves, so alone...
Such a lie...

Complete, next to yours
I feel the burn upon my soul
Of being next to you
If you hurt me, I'd hurt you
Because you'd have hurt youself
And when nothings perfect in this pretty world
I'm ok, next to you

Juliet died to join her love
For Romeo so loved her
And Romeo died in such nirvana
For they joined arms forever

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  • aaaaaaaa
    July 25, 2008

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    ROFL I can't stop laughing! the first stanza is priceless! so unexpected, well done thanks for sharing.