Unspoken words
with a bond
Amore
Waiting for hands
to intertwine
più vicino
Walking away
feeling played
morte all'interno
tears of shame
roll down my face
perché
Swirling lights
dancing slow
speranza
gentle summer breeze
runs threw the trees
reaching me with your
touch.
bisogno
Holding tight
forever we will
stay
se soltanto
With out a doubt
a crisp fall
breeze, hits are knees
non ora
Forever
i'll be yours
every time
you feel a breeze
li manco il mio amore
Author notes
some words are in Italian
A contest entry
- subtle by adsaige.
300 points, ended August 14, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is amazing
i love the whole idea of an english and spanish poem put together.
you already know i'm i sucker for all things spanish
enjoyed the read.
what does "li manco il mio amore" mean?
something to do with love right?
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Judged
Ingenious corporating the Italian into the writing, but some felt out of place. In this particular piece, I think you could have added something more, really poured out your soul on this one, but nonetheless, it is a good write.
Thank you for entering.
Good luck! -
interesting form, it creates a nice tone. good imagery and nice diction. a pretty poem. peace
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