He knows what I am thinking.
He feels what I am feeling.
He can smell my skin from distance.
He knows when I am around the corner.
He loves me too much, but we cannot be together.
Is this a true love or only an illusion? Who can break up this silence?
When every thing seems to different;
When I wake up in the morning.
Why is it that I feel my heart belong to him?
But my mind seems so confused being in love with him;
How every night he comes to me like an eagle in my dreams
and he sits down on my window watching me sleep
and I feel his love over my skin and I know that its him.
Forbidden is our silence love and he know s that
but it seems that he doesn't care.
And he is hunting me every night I go to sleep
and now I start to feel the same thing for him.
Is he my Soulmate; the true love that I m waiting for?
My heart trembles every time we see each other.
Is this the true love that I am feeling?
I feel my soul belongs to him like the wind belongs to God;
Like the love of the sun and the moon I cannot live without him.
When I am going to break up this silence love
and tell him that I am feeling what he is feeling;
that i know what he is thinking;
That my spirit knows the way that he comes to me in the night
when i am sleeping. When the morning appear like a mourning pigeon i go after him,
and my spirit goes back to my body.
Why is he comfortable only when he seems me?
Why does he come and kiss me, and forget all the obstacles that people put before us.
The nature of our love forget the difference between us
then why don't we break up this silence of our love?
what do you think about it
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Good Content
Had a great content. I kinda know that feeling
but as said before it could use some breaks
and also a little editing
it wasn't distracting though and the theme of silent love is great and i could feel the tugging of it all! -
You should put some breaks in there. Other wise it gets hard to read and it sort of blends together. I really liked the emotion in this. I'm sure many people can relate. Keep up the writing.
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I like the pouring out of the heart and straight forward way you put this, but yes once you tell us one thing I would not repeat it again I'd come up with something different or another way of saying it, but I'll tell you I really enjoyed your thoughts.
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this as one giant staza makes it very tedious to read. but the emotion here is very nice.
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I know the feeling. Been there, done that, got the scars to prove it. Nicely done, dear.
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