A sea of lies
Before a frozen shore
I am alone here
And it's so very cold
My viens are drying
Dripping, dying
I feel the pain
But the numb won't come
Fill me full
Of little lies
That hide behind
Your ice blue eyes
Drink me up
Reach into me
Let me get drunk
Off your smooth lies
Tell me all about her, Dear
Tell her where to shove it, Dear
I'm watching her drown
Smell the fear?
And here I lie watching
Slowly decaying
Watching your stories
Play against my ivory eyelids
Author notes
Do tell me all about her, Dear.
Make this work.
♥
4.23.08
Yes....
Comments
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very good write i really like it and i see you point of view keep on writing you are excellent!!! I felt the emotion through out this poem and i really like this about poems
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Very good jess, I like this one.
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well well well...
Just let me be the first to comment then. Yes dear. We are alone. We are ALL alone. If you feel pain, that's great. At least it's something you can communicate. At least it's an emotion. At least we can still feel.
...Constricted lungs
Pinched breath
Gasping at
Knotted words
Trying to verbalize
Trying to piece together
The disconnected fragments
Of his white hot memory
Smothered under
Cloak of
Flameless consumption...
Or something like that. My point is that it's much better than feeling nothing.
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