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yesterday, dead skin,
dust in the road where
you've already been

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  • adsaige
    July 29, 2008
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    Judged

    Perhaps this is more of a reserve than an actual piece for there seems to not be too much effort used in creating this piece. Do not get me wrong, it's beautiful imagery in it's short lines, but it does not carry a polish, adorned, and finished piece.

    Thank you for entering. Good Luck.