i should have known your course in life
when you fucked me the day i met you
on a public bench, beneath a loquacious finch
Heavenly Father, what did i do to upset you
to make you yoke me with a cheating whore
is it me that you abhor
a succubus, you whorish slut
out of the depths of hell you slithered
into my life with such zeal and strife
to cause my life to whither
i let you in
so im part of this sin
but i wont take my life for penance
but yours...
i'll take for vengeance
if you needed feces to live
i wouldn't coat you with my shit, i doubt it
if you were rolling in pain, engulfed in fire
i wouldn't piss on you to douse it
i hate you to the depths of "hatevity"
i want to remove you from the face of the earth
i wish i could go back in time
to slay your mother before your birth
Author notes
TOMBRUIZE
A contest entry
- Write about an X its closure time by Shydreamer3.
450 points, ended September 3, 2008, 29 entries
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Comments
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Wow ok now this is what I am talking about venting is good.....ur def a good candidate for this contest.
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