The love I have for you won't ever change,
I cradle the little hope of what remains.
Distant times spent apart,
Listening to the lonely beat of our hearts.
I somehow feel empty,
My world torn down,
I feel that you slip away,
With the passing of the days.
It hurts!
I feel the pain.
I prayed that it would be different,
But the accusations are not true.
Somehow through it all I still love you,
Am I stupid?
Putting my heart through this.
Will you be that one who won't walk away?
Or will it end like the rest,
Leaving me with the pieces,
To make my heart mend.
I in our room,
You somewhere else,
Do you not see?
That it seems our love is fading.
The pain I feel by things you say,
And the people you talk to.
No one needs to know,
What's going on between you and I.
Please baby let's take the remains,
And build it back to what we once had.
A contest entry
- Anything Goes by silentxparadise93.
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Comments
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This is a good poem, it has a lot of emotion in it and reads very well. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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Ok so I like the way this piece flowed in the beginning. It's a nice piece well written.
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cautious yes.
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amazing is what this poem is there is so much feeling in it and i know how you feel... good write
Thanks for entering
Love forever and always
Ciara Ann -
i know exactly how you feel
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i like this poem alot,
its very very well written,
its true we all want second chances,
all my love, hope everythings ok,
kitty xxx -
Aw. Everyone wants a second chance. I hope it works out. <33
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Thanks a bunch. This one was hard for me to write but I did it. I am glad you liked it. I too hope it works out.
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