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The Remains

The love I have for you won't ever change,
I cradle the little hope of what remains.
Distant times spent apart,
Listening to the lonely beat of our hearts.
I somehow feel empty,
My world torn down,
I feel that you slip away,
With the passing of the days.
It hurts!
I feel the pain.
I prayed that it would be different,
But the accusations are not true.
Somehow through it all I still love you,
Am I stupid?
Putting my heart through this.
Will you be that one who won't walk away?
Or will it end like the rest,
Leaving me with the pieces,
To make my heart mend.
I in our room,
You somewhere else,
Do you not see?
That it seems our love is fading.
The pain I feel by things you say,
And the people you talk to.
No one needs to know,
What's going on between you and I.
Please baby let's take the remains,
And build it back to what we once had.

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  • amazing is what this poem is there is so much feeling in it and i know how you feel... good write
    Thanks for entering
    Love forever and always
    Ciara Ann

  • ImmortalOne
    August 21, 2008
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    i know exactly how you feel

  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 25, 2008

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    i like this poem alot,
    its very very well written,
    its true we all want second chances,
    all my love, hope everythings ok,
    kitty xxx

  • Poetic Obscenity
    July 25, 2008
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    Aw. Everyone wants a second chance. I hope it works out. <33

    • Lost-Lesbian
      July 25, 2008
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      Thanks a bunch. This one was hard for me to write but I did it. I am glad you liked it. I too hope it works out.
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