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[ Coarse soft skin, ]

Coarse soft skin,
Tantalizing touch.
Down to the bone.
Eyes look of peace,
But deep inside full of hate,
As they look at those who don't see.
Thinking how it would be nice,
To end it all,
But come up short handed,
As it falls.
Tears run down the cheeks,
Twisted forms race in the mind,
The body slowly dies.
No one could understand,
This lifeless form,
As it gets buried,
Hearing the words no more.

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Just something that came to mind and I went with it.

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  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 25, 2008

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    ooh i like this
    the imagery in this is like amazing,
    this is great and very well written,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx


  • Poetic Obscenity
    July 25, 2008
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    Well

    I'm glad it did. It happens to be absolutley gorgeous.