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'They'

They Come,
They Go

They Rhyme,
They Flow

They're Hard,
They're Sweet

They can't undo,
They Repeat

They Forgive,
They Forget

They Begin,
They Regret

They Cry,
They Feel

They hurt,
They Heal

They Stop,
They Start

They're Together,
They're Apart

They are Dark,
They are Light

The will not,
They Might

They Fail,
They Pass

They are Nothing,
They're a Task

The are Next,
They are Last

They are the Furture
and the Past.

Author notes

Peace.
Love.
Forever.

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  • Jack Necron
    June 11

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    I like the flow of this poem, and the way it feels. It is sad, but the rhyme scheme makes it feel like an old child's rhyme.

    "They are Nothing,
    They're a Task

    The are Next,
    They are Last"

    I like that one the most. Overall, this is a great poem.

  • powerpuffs
    March 16
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    REALLY GOOD

    SO CREATIVE! WHERE DID U GET THE IDEA?

  • LilyFate
    March 16
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    i like it!

    sorry. i dont love it. i just like it!

  • ecrivain01
    July 29, 2008
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    No chance here ...

    I'd say remove it and enter another that might have a better shot at a trophy.