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Do You Really Love Me?

I often ask myself.
Do you really love me?
Like I love you.
Feeling your hiding something,
How sometimes you make me feel like I'm not even here,
How my mind races,
Asking myself over and over,
Do you really love me?
Moments where I am mad,
You ask me why,
Shouldn't you look back,
And see the things you said to me.
It hurts me going throught his,
The fighting, my tears, an empty touch,
Do you really love me?
Like I love you!

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  • aaaaaaaa
    July 25, 2008

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    nice write here, so much emotion spilling from your pen. "The fighting, my tears, an empty touch," this line is a little awkward for me. overall great write and thanks for sharing.


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 25, 2008

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    this is so great, i love this alot,
    i know how you feel...ive felt this so much,
    this is so great i love this,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx


  • Poetic Obscenity
    July 25, 2008

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    Wow. I know this feeling, too well. It'll all be ok dear. If she doesn't, eventually you will find that one person that wants to give up..everything to be with you. =]
    That's what you deserve. -nod nod-