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Snow Spring

Was it all in a dream?

That She covered me in cream,

Washed it off, in the snow spring,

Oh so cold ... my senses did sing,

Splashing around, like frantic fish 

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Shivering and shaking, with body so cold,

My eyes enjoy the pressure of the blindfold.

I hear the sound, of chains that clank

I knew next, my Mistress, I would thank

For she gave to me, an inside glow

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She lovingly placed me, in the clanking chains

The beauty, of her dominance continued to reign

Allowing me to release, in orgasmic screams

Was this a fantasy, in one of my dreams?

It was Mistress’s pleasure, in pleasuring me.

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For The Prompt Coffee House

Use a group of phrases to inspire the muse. Use in any order or the order given as the muse takes really.

Prompt: snow spring, chains that clank, like frantic fish

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  • hotchocolate gold member
    July 26, 2008

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    This was good!

    The beauty, of her dominance continued to reign
    Allowing me to release, in orgasmic screams
    Was this a fantasy, in one of my dreams?
    It was Mistress’s pleasure, in pleasuring me.


  • Ceridwens Soul silver member
    July 25, 2008

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    'Shakes my head' what have I done????

    What happened to the innocent (so she claimed once) sub I was getting?

    GRINS

    Nice heated write My slutacious one

    YLD

    Jem xxxxxx