I am…
a bent flower; waiting
for sun to shine
Author notes
10 words to, thoughts of myself
A contest entry
- Describe yourself once more in 10 words { The Best of the Best } by Noir mariposa...x.
1600 points, ended August 14, 2008, 40 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wowsies.
{That's not a word but anyway...}
This was gorgeous and so well written
"a bent flower;
waiting
for sun to shine"
I think I found a new favourite ten words lol
Thank you for entering again ^^
Claire x
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Waiting for our saviors...yes. I feel this very much.
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Cool, This was amazing. I loved the line;
a bent flower; waiting
And how you've got that space before waiting, as if you are waiting to read the rest of the poem.
A wonderful write that created lovely imagery, I wish you all the best in this contest.
Rose -
this is lovely, Mally...wonderful metaphor
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This is so suitable for us all - waiting for someone to help us, to nurture us, to love us. Waiting for sun, for light, for water, for strong roots - very metaphoric and to the point. Great use of verbiage to convey how you feel about yourself.
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