A cookie cutter life
a dream in my mother's head
words screaming at me
a promising future's purity
I know you love this song
I've seen you dance and sing
I wonder if you felt anything
I wonder too much
we'll never know anything but what we've known before
isn't that how you felt?
isn't that what you said?
I swear to god
I don't believe in god
I can't believe in anything
but I need it, I need it
I want it, I want it
and I swear I'm talking to you
through someone else or something else
anyway to get to you
can you hear me?
it is even my voice?
A contest entry
- I Need Favorites ^___^ by edit my world..
555 points, ended September 3, 2008, 68 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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well one thankies for entering into my contest...
i loved the first stanza it was wonderfully awesme..
this was really awesome and it was just full of the angst that i like to read...but i can rarely find it lol
so thankies again for entering and good luck hun...though i think u are already my favorite lol eh well
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Already your favorite? Wow, that's great news. Thanks a bunch
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