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Stealing My Sorrow From Him...

Take a step back,
Relax,

They dont know who you are.
But do you even know?

You say one thing,
But you do another.

You say your this,
But really your that.

I'm only fooling myself
I don't know who I am

I know who i want to be
but that is something that never can.

Fooling them,
Is what I live for.

Never saying the same thing,
Never doing the same thing.

It all just kinda of happened
Now I'm only fooling myself.

Author notes

1. tell me what my name means to you. Only fooling myself. it can mean so many different things.

Ok I am entering this but i dont know if i even like it or if it even makes sense...please tell me what you think i need to know what i could change and what i cant...Thanks so much....

La Tua Cantante

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  • SouthernDownpour
    July 25, 2008

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    hmmm, i was wondering if someone was going to chose this option. thanks .

    Anyway on with the poetry. i liked this. my name can mean alot of things. i guess it just depends on the person. only fooling myself about me huh?

    "I'm only fooling myself
    I don't know who I am"
    couldnt have said it better myself.

    good piece, and good luck in the contest.