Everything inside my heart despises you
As you sit there hollow taunting us with your words
You've ammounted to nothing, but a vengeful spirit
All you want is to destroy the lives of others
I just wish you would see the error of your ways
Because karma will come back to seek its revenge
No one can escape the wrath of pure vengence
And you are no better then any other evil that lives
Your corrupt insane thoughts will haunt you in the end
You will be the only shell of a person that you have left
For I was gone the minute you spewed your hatred
I won't let you take me down with your contaminated heart
I can't be the one to let a spineless being belittle me
But some poor soul will allow you to condemn them
Maybe someone out there will show you some justice
And you will regret the damage you did to all us
Because hell hath no fury then another woman scorned
She'll curse you with the same animosity you've caused others
I will one day prevail when I see nothing, but pity
In reality you may be a person, but to me your just pitiful
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Yeah just something I had to get out. did u like?
What did you think
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wow! you are spitting fire, girl! this is packed with emotion. i think everyone can relate to feeling this way about someone in their lives at one time or another. and you have captured the energy of a woman scorned (who decided in the end to take the high road.) neat read. - NANGALEEMA
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I loved how you used your words here to describe this a hole. I think this is definetly something you need to get out and a very good thing to get out. I loved how you showed no remorse here, but at the same time you rose above this stupid individual as he sounds. I think karma is a bitch and it comes back to bite you in the ass. I loved how you showed us this.
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You have an obvious talent....your words and flow in this poem were impecable.....i absolutely loved this poem and my favorite lines in the poem are "Everything inside my heart despises you
As you sit there hollow taunting us with your words
You've ammounted to nothing, but a vengeful spirit
All you want is to destroy the lives of others
I just wish you would see the error of your ways
Because karma will come back to seek its revenge
No one can escape the wrath of pure vengence
And you are no better then any other evil that lives" -
Wow...angsty, and your bg choice was excellent, there is nothing better to emphasize a dark poem than a raven backdrop...good write...keep on penning!!!
Enjoyed the read,
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From the word's of TV Land's wise man Mr. T ... "I pity the fool!"
Sounds like you want to break a foot in this guys ass! He hurt you
.. I'm sorry. I liked your poem, like all the rest 
My favorite lines are:
"Maybe someone out there will show you some justice
And you will regret the damage you did to all us"
Great write, keep it up!
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There are 2 ways I've found works best for me to VENT MY FRUSTRATION, ANGER AND EVEN HATRED:
The first is PRAYER!
The second is POETRY!
BOTH are great outlets for "what's eating you"! The key is, DON'T LET IT! And the best way is to FORGIVE! Because bitterness is a killer, and the only one you hurt when you want vengeance is YOU! God keeps real good books! And He can "repay" much better than I can! And believe me, NO ONE "gets away with" ANYTHING!!! Because EVERYONE will one day stand before the Lord Jesus Christ to give an account! I had a grandfather who was a child molestor (including my sister!) He died and went to hell, and I've shed NO TEARS over that! He's getting what's his due FOR EVER! And for that, I PRAISE GOD!!!
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sounds like a pretty nasty break up... uh oh.. I may be wrong.. Very deep with anger.. It's nice to vent through poetry.. Good job
Rose
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